Esther Sylvester

Hey Wario, how good it is to be reviewing your work again. I think it's going to be a long review so sit tight! This was great. It kept my ...

Hi there! I shall be reviewing you today. Now, I love Psych. It's like my favorite TV show. The thing about fanfiction is that it's all about the writers making ...

Hey there! First off, this was a very random piece so it was hard to take (and review) it seriously. And although it has laughing value, this doesn't have any ...

Hi there! Here's Esther Sylvester for a review. I'm just going to get into the meat of things and review your butt off, okay? 
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Hi there! So this was a really good poem. There were some parts that felt a little forced and so I'm going to point them out real quick. Clouds left ...

Hey there! Sorry I took so long. Woah, I liked this chapter a lot more than the first one. It has a lot more emotion in it, and it flows ...

Hi there! Esther Sylvester is here for her one hundreth review. Huzzah! This was very good! Nice pace and imagery, with an ending that left the reader wanting more. The ...

Welcome to YWS! I'm Esther, pleased to meet you! Have you introduced yourself on the welcome board yet? It's under the community tab. Everyone is nice here and will be ...

Hello Wario! I am Esther, pleased to meet you. I shall be reviewing you today! Rejoice or quall with fear, I don't care. :D Good job here, very good job. ...

Hey Pigeon! I, Esther Sylvester, shall be reviewing you today. This was excellent. You captured the feel of being blind almost perfectly. Also, your descriptions are excellent. There were a ...

Sorry bro, I don't believe you. You have definitely read Percy Jackson books before you wrote this. I knew something was up when you mentioned Poseidon, the father of Percy ...

Hello there! This was interesting and well written. Your grammar is very good. I kind of had a sense of what was going on even though I didn't read the ...

This was really good! At first I wasn't sure about the second person use but I think it really helped to engross the reader in the story. I think the ...

Hey! This was very well written and descriptive. The only issue I have here is that there isn't a point to it. Why is he here, alone in this desolate ...

Hello! This is quite good, but rough. You seem to skip about a bit, and your comma use is a little iffy. I liked this though because it was very ...